1 May 2003

This month's newsletter comes a little early because Megan will be out
of town. The literary calendar therefore will not be updated for a few
days.

In This Issue:

Letter from Meg

• wordsinhere joins Poets 4 Peace on Liberation Day
• Don't miss the last of The Open Stanza's first season!
• Versal: Submission Call
• May Event Picks

LETTER FROM MEG

Why (not) Cliché

[This month's Letter is a continuation of a larger discussion begun in April's Letter. If you missed it, visit our Newsletter archives.]

If you've ever been in a writing workshop, you'll have heard it - maybe even about one of your own poems: 'This [fill in the blank] is cliché.' I've heard it before. We all have, because it's easy to do. Wracking our brains at 2am, the cigarette we smoked an hour ago still singeing our throats, the coffee cold, and the poem hiccupping halfway through because YOUJUSTCANNOT figure a new way to describe the rain.

The rain pours down like tears on the windowpane.

Who HASN'T compared rain to tears? That's the point of the cliché - it's been done so many times it has completely lost its descriptive and/or emotional power. It is the task of poetry, then, - as Pound said - to make it new; to revive these words - or their meanings - in order to reach beyond the flatness of the page.

The obvious response is: 'How do you know a word or phrase has lost it's emotional or descriptive power? How do you know it's turned cliché?' The great M.H. Abrams tried to explain it in his Glossary of Literary Terms: a cliché 'signifies an expression that deviates enough from ordinary usage to call attention to itself and has been used so often that it is felt to be hackneyed or cloying' (emphasis mine). Even Abrams could not pinpoint the reaction that we have - or, more likely, the reaction we DON'T have - to the cliché. To save face, however, he eloquently quotes Alexander Pope's satiric commentary against the poetasters:

Where'er you find 'the cooling western breeze,'
In the next line, it 'whispers through the trees';
If crystal streams 'with pleasing murmurs creep,'
The reader's threatened (not in vain) with 'sleep.'

(Essay on Criticism, II.11.350 ff)

Poetry which leans on the authority of such lines, which pivots around their supposed power, (the poetry of Jewel, for example) is lazy. Are poets not meant to, on some level, play with words? If we only rely on the centuries' tried and tired phrasing, why write it down (again) now?

Every few decades poetry has an existential crisis, and most of the poets I know have had one - or several. Typical questions include: What is the point of continuing Poetry anyway if every subject has been addressed, every emotion conveyed? What is the point if poetry is an obstacle course around the cliché and archaic? And what if I'm writing this poem in a fit of tears and it IS raining outside?

Even though the theories rarely help in the mid-moment of writing, for the poet in mid-existential crisis they can be useful. Language is constantly changing, evolving. New dialects form, new metaphors and associations within the colloquial develop. The way we would phrase something now is not the way it would have been put 40 or even 10 years ago. Poets, like artists and musicians, can never been done. Their task remains in a constant state of the finishing.

For me, what is so...cool...about language is that it's momentary. Poets have a choice: we can either record the old questions in the vocabulary and syntax of our modern language or we can reduce both to cliché and melodrama. If we're up to the task then we work hard - because poetry is NOT easy - to revise that line we wrote in the middle of last night about the rain:

The rain pours down the windowpane, tears.

Nice internal rhyme embedded in iambic meter, and clever implied metaphor. If we have to use rain and tears in this way, we might as well play with the syntax to add double-meaning. Or, we could chuck the tears and write our pain another way - through poetry's greatest ally: the image:

from Exposure
Robin Robertson

Silence is rain with the sound turned down,
and I stare out now on a clear view
of something left out on the line:
a life, snagged there—
drenched, shrunken,
unrecognizably mine.

(Poetry, April 2002, p15)

You should read the whole poem, but we can't print it. Email Meg and she'll email it your way.

NEWS

wordsinhere Poets Join Liberation Day Festivities

wordsinhere joins Palabras, A Love Supreme Braodcasts, and Baobabconnections in a poetic coalition on Liberation Day. This coalition, dubbed Poets 4 Peace, will host a tent at the Festival with poetry from 11am to 10pm. The event will also be streamed live on radio and available on the internet. For more information check out www.baobabconnections.org or email poets@end-war.com.

Only Two More Left! The Open Stanza: May 23!

If you've missed this season's The Open Stanza, you're missing out on something largely unfound in the Amsterdam and Dutch monthly scene: a night of international performance and poetry. May's night brings you another mirage of the multicultural, multilinguistic, multipoetic. Come down to Volta on Friday, May 23 to hear, see, dance, and drink.

We're shaping the night and looking forward to a good one. The full listing of performance guests will be available soon but for now, pop the date into your calendars. Prue and the rest of The Open Stanza crew are gonna end the season with a bang.

Click here to visit our Stanza pages, including an archive of previous shows!

wordsinhere's Second Workshop Begins May 7

All writers in and around Amsterdam are invited to join wordsinhere's second creative writing workshop. The list is getting full so be sure to contact Meg soon if you want to join. This round will not only focus on the writing itself but also on revision and performance. The workshop will go until September 24. For more details check the workshop pages on the site or email Meg (meg@wordsinhere.com).

CALLS FOR WRITERS

Versal: call for submissions

The literary print magazine of wordsinhere — Versal — is now accepting submissions for its second issue out December, 2003. An international collection of writing fit for your bathroom magazine rack. Accepted: up to 5 poems; 4000 word max for prose, essay, review. Simultaneous as long as you tell us. Not accepted: what you already know can be published because it has. Appreciated: urgent, involved, unexpected.

Full guidelines and online sample of our first issue can be found here. For questions and submissions, email submissions@wordsinhere.com. We accept snail mail only with a SASE: Van Hogendorpstraat 123-I; 1051 BL Amsterdam, the Netherlands.

you're a writer...but can you speak?

The Open Stanza is always on the lookout for writers who perform their work with risk, who give their writings sound well-deserved, who take their words from print to stage without something getting lost in the transfer.

Send samples of your writing (poetry, prose, whatever) to openstanza@wordsinhere.com or by post, Van Hogendorpstraat 123-I, 1051 BL Amsterdam. Upcoming dates of The Open Stanza: May 23, June 20.

MAY EVENTS WE'RE GOING TO ATTEND

Poets 4 Peace

Monday May 5, 11am

Oosterpark Festival, Amsterdam

Inspired by initiatives in other countries, Palabras, A Love Supreme Braodcasts and Baobabconnections formed a poetic coalition and decided there was no alternative but to resort to verse. On Liberation Day, Poets 4 Peace will host a tent at the Festival with poetry from 11am to 10pm. The event will also be streamed live on radio and available on the internet. For more information check out www.baobabconnections.org or email poets@end-war.com.

Palabras - The Phrase Stage

Sunday 11 May, 8:30pm

Paradiso, Amsterdam

Performances & open-mic for poets, lyricists, & wordsmiths. More information: www.palabras.nl. Entrance: 6.50.

Kilometer Zero: Paris Performances

Saturday 17 May, 8:30pm

Perdu, Amsterdam

With Adrian Hornsby, Jeremy Mercer, Quinn Commendant and others. In the midst of cultural Paris lives Kilometer Zero: magazine, art collective, and squat. Under the auspices of a group of expats from England, Canada, and the US, in 2000 the first edition of the cultural magazine Kilometer Zero was published. A magazine for writers and artists running for our massconsuming and materialist society, offering a rare and interesting view on the world. This night, Kilometer Zero brings in association with the Nights by Perdu a show, literature reading, and a party with burlesque performances. Entrance: €5.

The Open Stanza

Friday 23 May, doors open 8pm

Volta, Amsterdam

Featuring poets Ana Simeon and Sarah O'Gorman. DJ Iron Melon returns to the decks and our very own Prue Duggan will keep you busy with poetry, live music, and boogy. Join wordsinhere for another night of the Stanza. Entrance: €5.

For the full list of May Events and for a listing of regular shows, click here.

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